8.03.2006

dna project

http://www.dnaproject.org/

7 comments:

julietred said...

Linda, I took a look at the "about" section of your website. I like what you say. I'm wondering though, why you make "about the artist" a link to another page? Why not just make it part of the rest of the text on the "about" page? It seems very much part of the "about" text.

Also, I like it that you put the link to the answers. But I wish it were in with the text. It feels a little like an after thought positioned to the side like that. Perhaps it could go within a sentance following the list of questions? Something like "To read the answers to the participants questions go to" then the link.

julietred said...

I really like the way the site title contrast builds. It's nice.

julietred said...

Just looking at the "contact" page.

Love the photo. Maybe repeat the "about the artist" info. If you keep it as a link put the link. If you don't just repeat that text. I like what you wrote.

julietred said...

The photo's section is nice but the "photos of other work" seciton is great! I love the way you did it with the enlarged photos and the brief explination. So well done.

julietred said...

I think the "entries" page could use a little more info. Something like, "All participants in the DNA project recieve a DNA collection kit and a questionaire. The questions asked are: then list the quesitons. To read the participants answers go to"

fancyflurryflyingflame said...

thanks so much for all your suggestions...i took them all!

you're the best!

fancyflurryflyingflame said...

thanks! i took all your suggestions. you're the best!